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Eric ([personal profile] overbringer) wrote in [community profile] overbox2014-12-18 11:50 am

Good vs Evil

I'm going to basically just copy/paste Avshar's setting, and then update this post as people offer suggestions.

In a distant land, two kingdoms warred: Videssos and Makuran. They were very different lands, but both honorable and civilized nations. About a generation ago, however, Makuran was invaded and conquered by the barbarian nomad hordes known as Yezd. Makuran now struggles under their new overlords, who have their sights set on Videssos. The most feared general of Yezd is the Wizard-Prince Avshar, who has led Yezd's armies in victory after victory, first against Makuran, and now against Videssos in stinging raids.

The last few months have been quiet, however. Avshar has not been seen along the borders. Rather, he has been seen in Videssos's capital itself, acting as an emissary for prisoner exchanges, arguments over who owns towns on the border, and other such business. He has so far minded his manners enough that he has not forfeited diplomatic immunity, but the Videssian officers and troops are just waiting for an excuse, especially since Avshar saw fit to bring his retinue of "aids", as unsavory a lot as ever there were who are causing no end of complaints amongst the citizens.

With open war on the horizon and an ambassador who's very presence is an open insult, tensions are at the breaking point. The only question is who will snap first.

[personal profile] princeofskotos 2014-12-19 07:16 pm (UTC)(link)
If Kaoruko was seriously a badass, she probably gave Avshar a headache or two during her career. It's not like he wasn't around, after all. He is not above seeking revenge on her granddaughter to satisfy his own feelings, should he realize who she is.

Obviously he won't kill her outright, for plot reasons, but if anyone was to show her what harshness the world has to offer, it could certainly be him.
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[personal profile] blossominghero 2014-12-21 06:07 am (UTC)(link)
That sounds fine to me. I was kinda worried about making Kaoruko too much of a bad ass, but if other people are receptive to it, I'm good with it. ^^ and that sounds fun for Tsubomi too.

[personal profile] princeofskotos 2014-12-21 06:11 am (UTC)(link)
"Fun for Tsubomi"...

Yes...
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[personal profile] blossominghero 2014-12-21 06:13 am (UTC)(link)
so much fun