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Eric ([personal profile] overbringer) wrote in [community profile] overbox2014-12-18 11:50 am

Good vs Evil

I'm going to basically just copy/paste Avshar's setting, and then update this post as people offer suggestions.

In a distant land, two kingdoms warred: Videssos and Makuran. They were very different lands, but both honorable and civilized nations. About a generation ago, however, Makuran was invaded and conquered by the barbarian nomad hordes known as Yezd. Makuran now struggles under their new overlords, who have their sights set on Videssos. The most feared general of Yezd is the Wizard-Prince Avshar, who has led Yezd's armies in victory after victory, first against Makuran, and now against Videssos in stinging raids.

The last few months have been quiet, however. Avshar has not been seen along the borders. Rather, he has been seen in Videssos's capital itself, acting as an emissary for prisoner exchanges, arguments over who owns towns on the border, and other such business. He has so far minded his manners enough that he has not forfeited diplomatic immunity, but the Videssian officers and troops are just waiting for an excuse, especially since Avshar saw fit to bring his retinue of "aids", as unsavory a lot as ever there were who are causing no end of complaints amongst the citizens.

With open war on the horizon and an ambassador who's very presence is an open insult, tensions are at the breaking point. The only question is who will snap first.

[personal profile] princeofskotos 2014-12-19 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
There is actually a canonical scene for Avshar where he is summoning a swarm of demonlings, and it goes about how the head demon tries to turn on him and his punishment for it is he cuts off it's mental link to the swarm. Does that sound like a thing that might fuck with Moge-ko's head?
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[personal profile] dictator_ko 2014-12-19 12:11 am (UTC)(link)
Actually, mind if I discussed this with you privately? The origin of her and her species is kinda a plot hook, but Avshar might know about it. (And Foxfire wanted to discuss our backgrounds in private which is why I'm still holding it kinda confidential.)
Edited 2014-12-19 00:12 (UTC)

[personal profile] princeofskotos 2014-12-19 12:13 am (UTC)(link)
/sends a private plurk.

[personal profile] princeofskotos 2014-12-19 12:19 am (UTC)(link)
Based on private discuss idea is withdrawn.